Yasha, Nice, Very nice. I love your pulp and seeds. I am amazed at how well everyone has done with the seeds which I would have thought to be the most difficult part. I love your twisted peel and especially the part coming directly off the fruit. I love the base of the fruit and the touch of highlight on the right side. I think your peeling touching the table is a little washed out it looks like to me that you may have used a little to much white to lighten. Try yellow or a touch of blue instead of so much white. Anyway over all I love this. The background works well and is such a nice color. Can't wait to see your entry next month.
Very interesting blue/green in your background. It's a lovely color/shade. The twisted peel was done very well, as is the peel & seeds. Angela gave you lots of good comments on things you can try/change. Overall, I have to say I like this one as is!
Nice job. The only thing I can see is that the color of the cap part of the peel doesn't quite match the skin of the pomegranate. But that could just be the photo.
Yasha, Nice, Very nice. I love your pulp and seeds. I am amazed at how well everyone has done with the seeds which I would have thought to be the most difficult part. I love your twisted peel and especially the part coming directly off the fruit. I love the base of the fruit and the touch of highlight on the right side. I think your peeling touching the table is a little washed out it looks like to me that you may have used a little to much white to lighten. Try yellow or a touch of blue instead of so much white. Anyway over all I love this. The background works well and is such a nice color. Can't wait to see your entry next month.
ReplyDeleteI've seen the new photo of your painting and this one doesn't do it justice! Your skin is great, as is the shadows. Great depth!
ReplyDeleteThanks Angela for your valuable suggestions will definitely keep this in mind.
ReplyDeletePaula thank you so much for your input.
Very interesting blue/green in your background. It's a lovely color/shade. The twisted peel was done very well, as is the peel & seeds. Angela gave you lots of good comments on things you can try/change. Overall, I have to say I like this one as is!
ReplyDeleteNice job. The only thing I can see is that the color of the cap part of the peel doesn't quite match the skin of the pomegranate. But that could just be the photo.
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