Artist: Sylvia Young
Medium: Pastel on paper
Size: 8" x 12"
Artist's blog: http://sylsarttrials.blogspot.com/
Artist's blog: http://sylsarttrials.blogspot.com/
Thursday, November 25, 2010
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Announcement and a New Challenge 72 - Pear on a Branch
Announcement and a New Challenge 72 - Pear on a Branch
Challenge 71 - Boldt Castle Entrance Tower on Heart Island in the Saint Lawr, Oct 31 - Dec 10, 2017
Photo For Challenge 69 - Rolling Countryside, July 13 2017 - Aug 28, 2017
Photo For Challenge 69 - Rolling Countryside, July 13 2017 - Aug 28, 2017
Photo for challenge 68 - May17 to July 13, 2017
Photo For Challenge 67 - Shepherd Dog, Apr 02 2017 - May 14, 2017
Challenge 66 - Flower Bouquet - Jan 29 - Mar 12, 2017
Challenge 65 - Narcissus in a Vase - Dec 5 - Jan 23 2017
Challenge 64 - Old Bucket - Oct 25 - Dec 4 2016
Challenge 63 - Fruit Cake - Sep 11 - Oct 24 2016
Photo For Challenge 62 - Proud Parents - July 24 - Sep 11, 2016
Challenge 61 - Creating a Composition - June 5 - July 25 2016
Challenge 60 - Mimi - April 10 - May 22, 2016
CHALLENGE 59 - Winter Feb 23 - Apr 10, 2016
Photo For Challenge 58 - Half Peeled Orange - Jan 11, 2016 - Feb 24, 2016
PHOTO FOR CHALLENGE 57 - PRIVATE MOMENTS - November 23, 2015 - Jan 11, 2016
Photo For Challenge 56 - Still Life with Lemons - Sep 16, 2015 - Oct 25, 2015
PHOTO FOR CHALLENGE 55 - BOWL WITH CHERRIES - AUGUST 02, 2015 - SEPTEMBER 14, 2015
Photo For Challenge 54 -Still Life - Basket of Fruites - June 16, 2015 - July 27, 2015
Challenge 53 - Easter in the Garden - May 4, 2015 to June 14, 2015
Photo For Challenge 52 - Parliament of Canada, Ottawa - March 11, 2015 - May 04, 2015, 2015
Photo For Challenge 51 "Coffee Break" - Jan 25, 2015 - March 8, 2015
Challenge 50 - "Teach us About Your Painting Style" - Nov 25, '14 - Jan 25, '15
Challenge 49 - "Still Life with Tomatoes" - Oct 13, 2014 - Nov 25, 2014
PHOTO FOR CHALLENGE 48 "Proud Rooster" - Aug 29, 2014 - OCT 13, 2014
Photo For Challenge 47 "Varadero - Cuba" - July 6 - Aug 26, 2014
Photo For Challenge 46 "Beautiful Orange Rose" - May 19 - June 30, 2014
Photo For "Challenge 45 -"Approximately 1820 Clay Water Pot" (Apr 05 - May 18, 2014)
Photo For "Challenge 44 -"Lady's Slipper Orchid" (Feb 19 - April 02, 2014)
Photo For "Challenge - 43 - "Antique Rugs" (Jan 06, 14 - Feb 17, 14)
Photo For "Challenge - 42 - "Wine & Rose" (Nov 12, '13 - Jan 05, '14)
Photo For "Challenge - 41 - Oct 3, '13 - Nov 9, '13
Photo For "Challenge - 40 - Aug 19, '13 - Sep 30, '13
Photo For "Challenge - 39 - July 08. '13 - Aug 18, '13
Photo For "Challenge - 38 - May 27. '13 - July 08, '13
Photo For "Challenge - 37 - April 15, '13 - May 26 , '13
Photo For "Challenge - 36 - Mar 3, '13 - April 15, '13
Photo For "Challenge - 35 - "Egg Basket by Henri-Hoirace-Ronald Delaporte" - Jan 09, '13 - Feb 28, '13
Photo For "Challenge - 34 - "The Lacemaker by Vermeer" - Nov 26, '12 - Jan 7, '13
Challenge 33 - in the Style of Old Masters - (Oct 10 - NOv 26)
Photo For "Challenge - 32 - "Still Life With Orchids" (Sep19 - Oct 28) - 2012
Photo For "Challenge - 31- "Greeting a New Day" (July 30 - Sept 16) - 2012
Photo For "Challenge - 30- "Olympic Beach - Greece" (June 18 - July 29) - 2012
Photo For "Challenge - 29 - "White Lilies" (May08 - Jun 18 ) - 2012
Photo For "Challenge - 27- "Waiting For You" ( Feb 13 - March 25) - 2012
Photo For "Challenge - 28- "Spring Is Coming" (Mar 26 - May07) - 2012
Photo For "Challenge - 26- "Simply Delicious" (Jan 1 - Feb 13) - 2012
Photo For "Challenge - 25 - "Betrayed Dreams" (Nov 14 - Dec 31) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 24 - Still Life With Cantaloupe" ( Oct 10 - Nov 14) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 23 - Old Door " (Aug 29 - Oct 9) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 22 "(July 18 To Aug 28) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 21" (Jun 05 - July 17 ) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 20" (May 16 - Jun 04 ) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 19" (Apr 24 - May 15 ) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 18" (Apr 4 - Apr 24 ) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 17" (Mar 13 - Apr 04) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 16" (Feb 21 - Mar 12) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 15" (Jan 30 To Feb 21) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 14" (Jan 10 To Jan 29) - 2011
Photo For "Challenge - 13" (Dec 12 To Jan 8) - 2010
Photo For "Challenge - 12" (Nov 21 To Dec 10) - 2010
Photo For "Challenge - 11" (Oct 31 To Nov 20) - 2010
Photo For "Challenge - 10" (Oct 9 To Oct 30) - 2010
Photo For "Challenge - 9" (Sep 19 To Oct 9) - 2010
Photo For "Challenge - 8" (Aug 29 To Sep 18) - 2010
Photo For "Challenge - 7" (Aug 05 To Aug 28) - 2010
Photo For "Challenge - 6" (July 05 To Aug 03) - 2010
Photo For "Challenge - 5" (June 14 To July 04) - 2010
Photo For "Challenge - 4" (May 24 To June 13) - 2010
Photo for "Challenge III" (May 2- May 21) - 2010
Photo For "Challenge - II" (April 10 To May 3) - 2010
Photo For "Challenge - I" (March 21 To April 10) - 2010
5 comments:
Sylvia, well done. It is pleasing and harmonious painting. Here is my feedback:
Color harmony: It is very harmonious, except the blue vase. Somehow I would like to see more drama on the stage. All color values are close to each other in the middle range without extreme darks or lights.
3D effect: It is very lightly convincing. The background has potential to help, but the rose is not strong enough to achieve 3D effect.
Texture: Very little, almost none.
Composition: It is good. Maybe the vase should not be this close to the end of the painting.
Focus: The focus is clearly the rose. All looks great.
Thank-you Lela ,
That is exactly the type of crit i need - will try harder ,especially trying to get the whole range of tones.
All the best,
Syls
Hi Sylvia,I liked what you achieved using pastels.I am not very familiar with its techniques and uses but still feel that a little use of darks in the leaves and the rose would give more depth to it and agree to what Lela has to say about the color of the vase as its a little distraction.I loved the drops on the leaves and the background too.
I am always so impressed what artists can do with pastels! You've gotten some great advice here, and there is nothing I can add. I think the little card attached to the boquet makes a nice personal touch.
I like what you did on this, and really like how you made the image your own with the additions. I agree with the darks & lights that Lela mentioned. The vase doesn't bother me all that much, although moving it back more in the image would give more balance to the overall. Nice work.
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